Title: Shotgun Ontology
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 2,432
Plot: Ontology - n. A branch of metaphysics concerned with the nature and relationships of being. The Narrator explores his life while bleeding out in the middle of his personal war zone, ignoring the bullets in his body to think back on the man who lead him to where he is now. He recounts the beginning, the middle, and the end in a series of important events between him and his partner, Ben.
Warnings: Nothing too wild, some violence, disturbing themes.
Feedback: I'm pretty sure I'm shockingly amature compared to a lot of people on here, but I'm extraordinarily proud of this and I'd be elated if someone would like to give me a bit of constructive criticism so I can make it better.
Notes: This was originally written for a Creative Writing class I'm in as my first assignment. I couldn't believe this came from me at about eight in the morning, but it's my first draft and I'm disgustingly proud of it for that. I hope you enjoy this, because it's the first original piece I've posted to LiveJournal.

 

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